Howard
J. Sewell
Ten Ways to Improve
Your Seminar Invitation
(DM News, July 31, 1995)
Seminars have become one of the most popular means for
high technology companies to generate new business.
If you're a manager, work in a large metropolitan area
and subscribe to one or two computer publications, chances
are you receive invitations to product seminars at least
a few times a week, if not daily.
Not all seminars are successful, however. With so many
events taking place, even the best known firms can no
longer simply announce a seminar and feel confident
that people will show up. With lower response rates
and higher costs - in travel, audio visual equipment,
and hotel space - a less than successful event can
drive your cost per lead sky-high.
When the average MIS manager, for example, receives
dozens of direct mail invitations every month, how do
you ensure that yours gets read? Or even delivered?
Having designed and produced seminar invitations for
dozens of high-tech companies, we have developed several
rules of thumb to make each event as successful as possible.
The following 10 rules are drawn from that experience,
and many can be applied to all of your direct mail,
not just seminar invitations.
1.
Sell the Event, Not the Product. This is the
most important rule to remember when designing a
seminar invitation, yet failure to properly sell the
event is a common error. Keep in mind that your invitation
has one objective only to get people to the event.
Don't stuff your copy with superlatives about the product
and then mention the seminar as an afterthought. Even
if your product sounds great, if the recipient doesn't
want to come to the seminar, you've failed. Period.
Sell the benefits of your product in the context
of the event. Rather than "our software cuts development
time by 50 percent," say "Come to our free seminar and
you'll learn how you can cut development time by 50
percent."
2.
Make it Easy. Make responding to your invitation
as simple as possible. That means accommodating anyone
who might receive it. Some people think nothing of picking
up the phone and dialing an 800 number. Others, particularly
managers, would rather fill out a business reply card.
Always
provide both options. If you don't believe in reply
cards, test your invitation with a card vs. without
to gauge whether the reply card actually lifts response.
But don't stop there. Add a fax number. Add an e-mail
address, particularly if you're targeting an engineering
audience. Nearly 90 percent of your responses will probably
come either by phone or mail, but fax and e-mail are
becoming more and more popular. Why risk excluding those
potential customers who may not respond any other way?
If you're on the World Wide Web, give people who visit
your site a way to register for a seminar. But don't
list a web address on your direct mail piece - unless
you can track who the visitors are and how they heard
about you. Otherwise, they may simply dial in, download
a brochure and you'll never hear from them again.
3.
Give It the Personal Touch. There are two reasons
why people attend seminars. First, business incentives - learning how to increase productivity, cut costs,
gain a competitive edge, etc. Second, personal incentives - mixing with peers, getting out of the office for
a day, free breakfast, free coffee mug, etc.
Most seminar invitations focus exclusively on the business
benefits of attending the event. This ignores the fact
that ultimately, attendees come to the seminar to enjoy
the experience.
What do they receive when they attend? A free information
kit? A demo disk? A portfolio embossed with your company's
name? Include a photograph of these items in the invitation.
Mention a free breakfast (or lunch), if there is one.
Describe the presentation itself: is it "fast moving",
"exciting", "multimedia"? All of these make the event
sound more attractive.
4.
The More the Merrier. Include space on your reply
card for the person to write in the names of colleagues
who also might want to attend. This is an easy way to
increase your registration and capture names
for your database. Or, alternatively, ask them if there's
anyone else in the organization to whom you can send
an invitation. (Make sure you have a supply of blank
invitations on hand.)
5.
No Way Out. Most seminar reply cards include the
line, "Sorry, I can't attend. Please send me information
about your company/products." The reasoning is that
people who don't want to attend the seminar might be
more likely to respond to an information offer.
Adding this option increases response, but it also decreases
seminar attendance. Why? Because while people who
would never even consider attending the seminar may
ask for information, there's always a group of prospects
who given the choice will opt to be lazy and
request a brochure.
What's your priority - more leads or more people in
seats? If it's the latter, delete "I can't attend" from
your reply cards. If you want more leads, then there's
little reason to do a seminar. You'll get a higher response
if you spend the same amount of money creating a white
paper, for example, and using that as the offer instead.
6.
Review the Reviews. Do the people who attend your
seminars enjoy them? Do you get good reviews? Most companies
hand out evaluation forms at their seminars, but then
fail to leverage those comments to generate attendance
at future events.
Take some of the best quotes from your evaluation forms
and add them to your invitation. If the quotes need
"dressing up," add your own words and then call or fax
the person who filled out the form and ask for their
approval. You don't even have to quote them by name - just say (for example) "Senior Programmer, Fortune
500 Manufacturer."
7.
Test, Test, Test. This rule applies to all
direct mail, not just seminar invitations, but it has
particular significance for seminars because these are
often programs that companies repeat over time.
Testing doesn't have to mean paying for two entirely
different creative packages. It can be as simple as
mailing five weeks in advance vs. six weeks; window
envelope vs. closed-face envelope; first class vs. third
class; meter vs. stamp. The bottom line is if you don't
test, you're throwing money away, because even the slightest
incremental response can boost the results of your next
mailing. Even if this is a "one time only" event, test
anyway. Chances are you can use what you learn for similar
programs in the future.
8.
Be Specific. Because seminar direct mail usually
means writing the invitation long before the event has
taken shape, the agenda can often end up as an afterthought.
Yet, our experience shows this is often the first
thing the recipient turns to when opening the invitation.
After all, what better way to determine whether the
event is worth attending?
Beef up your agenda by doing more than listing times,
speakers and topics. Add bullets that describe what
the reader will learn in each session. (Remember,
don't focus on the benefits of the product or technology,
but on the benefits of the material to be presented.)
9.
Target the Right Audience. Most seminar invitations
aim too high. Companies don't understand why when they
rent a list of MIS managers, they end up with a room
full of software developers. They target the CEO, CIO
and CFO who 1) probably never attend seminars in the
first place, and 2) aren't appropriate targets, anyway.
Even if the CIO is the ultimate decision-maker, does
he or she have to cope regularly with the problem your
product solves?
Target the highest level at which the problem is
understood. Most high-tech sales are made bottom-up
rather than top down. The engineers and developers who
come to your seminar are the ones who will make the
sale happen, even if they don't actually sign the check.
Next time you rent a list, have the list manager divide
it into two groups based on job function (MIS managers
vs. developers, for example). Code them separately and
track which group responds at a higher rate.
10.
Keep it Simple. Contrary to what you might hear
from your direct marketing agency, the objective of
most business-to-business direct mail these days is
not to get noticed. The person who "notices"
direct mail is likely to be a mail clerk, so your invitation
may get discarded before it even leaves the mail room.
(Note: direct mail that gets noticed also tends to be
more expensive.)
No, your main objective should be to get your mail delivered.
That means it has to make it past the mail room, the
department secretary and the executive assistant. If
you're targeting managers in large corporations, the
more your invitation looks like "junk mail", the less
chance it has of ending end up on that manager's desk.
Test your most colorful, eye-catching invitation against
an ordinary, two-color, personalized letter package.
Use a live stamp and stay away from envelope copy. Type
or laser the address instead of using a label. The results
may surprise you.
Conclusions
A seminar can be a tough sell. Remember that when you
invite a business professional to a seminar, you're
asking for more than just a response - you're asking
for four hours of someone's valuable time. In your invitation,
focus on why the event is worth that investment. Describe
how the person will learn how to solve a particular
problem. Then use the event itself, rather than
the invitation, to present your product as the solution.