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July 1999
BREAK UP YOUR SALES LETTERS

Direct marketing theory maintains that before the average person reads a sales letter, he or she takes a second or two to scan the page, looking for highlights or clues to determine whether the letter merits the time to read at greater length.

If you design your letter to take up as little space as possible (adhering to an arbitrary one-page limit, for example), almost inevitably the result is a letter that looks crowded, with large, unwieldy paragraphs that are intimidating to look at, difficult to read, and impossible to scan.

In fact, compressing your letter onto one page is often the worst thing you can do. Instead, expand your letter by breaking up the text as much as possible. Techniques like bullets and sub-heads (short, highlighted phrases between paragraphs) may extend the length of your letter onto a second page, but they actually make the letter easier to read (and therefore, more inviting) by dividing it into smaller, more digestible pieces.

Sub-heads have another benefit also. Used to summarize key selling points, they serve as "teasers" - devices designed to grab the attention of the reader and motivate him or her to read further. To be most effective, each sub-head should deliver a concise, compelling benefit. For example:

Eliminate up to 40 percent of the code required to build your next application.

Deliver instant data access to remote offices - without bringing your network to a halt.

Add powerful customer reports to your e-business site - quickly and easily.


The best way to highlight sub-heads on the page is by underlining. (Underlined phrases stand out on the page more effectively than bold.) A second color or font is OK, but be cautious - too colorful, and your letter can look less like business correspondence and more like a flyer. Also, too many sub-heads (more than two or three per page, say) can clutter the page and make it more difficult to scan quickly.

                                                                                                                             




 
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